This feeling is unsettling
startling and strange
like cutting your tongue
on chocolate
how unnatural
to slide the smooth portion in
and find that after freezing
it has broken off on an edge
thats sharp and to a point
and now theres salt and sweet
mixing coiling each other
like wary dogs before a fight
like lovers before goodbye
blood and chocolate on my tongue
thats what this is like
this strange feeling in the seat of my stomach
flying and falling
fear and freedom
this unnatural thing
something like falling in love.
3 comments:
i love your slightly emoness. :)
ooh html!
bold!
italic much?
i'm so mysterious, look at me being anonymous. magical!
cut and served with chocolate
cuts smooth like chocolate
-cutting your tongue on chocolate?
how unnatural.
-like wary dogs before a fight,
like lovers before goodbye
exactly.
hannah this is good.
twenty lines. what a perfect length
when you can see the finish from the beginning,
those are my favourites
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