waiting so apathetically for my fingers
to spin it a tale and knot it together
with a clever phrase
throwing in some imagery for colour
and irony for weight
i throw and catch and turn about
and they ask are you
are you up
and I tell them
I'm up I'm up
except when I'm down
but hey babe you know babe
i'll always be around
talking into this little box
spilling my thoughts
like loose water in the rain
and i'll go back to the refrain
there is nothing to restrain me
no one to retrain me
and so when they ask
are you
are you up
and I tell them
I'm up I'm up
except when I'm down
but hey babe you know babe
i'll always be around
as mad as a hatter and with half the tea
so really tonight you'll have to excuse me
because i cursed old father time
and he turned around and cursed back at me
I and he and the blind mice three
telling each other our history
and they ask me
are you
are you up
and I tell them
I'm up I'm up
except when I'm down
but hey babe you know babe
i'll always be around
I'm up
I'm up
(except when I'm down)
and darling dearest
love my own
you know I'll always be
(I'll be around)
2 comments:
and they ask are you
are you up
and I tell them
I'm up I'm up
except when I'm down
but hey babe you know babe
i'll always be around
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mmm you know, there are days when i think children's tales teach us more about life than life itself.
Love the allusions. Love the cyclic theme
Brilliant work, very well written. I'm thinking it needs some trip-hop music to go with it or something.
:D
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