Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Good morning

sometimes i wonder how you dream
if you dream at all
i see scrolling 
behind your smoothly closed eyes
line after line of clearly defined
phrases (not like music
with its crescendoes and woven thoughts
that tangle around each other
like wildflowers until you are overcome
and submerge yourself in the liquid colour
pouring through your ears into
your sweet tasting mouth)
up and up these crisp sharp commands
like a to do list with small boxes
(like the box you place me in
with its appropriate corners
and its inflexible walls to hold up that glass ceiling
the one i keep banging my wings on)
for you to check through
with your pen that you use like a sword
its sharp edge that punctures these
my faerie tales
and then you awake and continue on
as if you never slept
but only plugged yourself into a wall
and decided to move when charged

i wonder sometimes if you dream
at all of me

3 comments:

Unknown said...

mmm. i like this a lot too. some humans are so inhuman. so many clever little twists in here. contrasts between machine and vitality, squares and explosions, faerie tales and computers. and so many clever links between them all. and that's just my ap english class telling me what to think about this poem. i like it. because judging is such a human characteristic, but it is so inhuman at the same time. or inhumane rather. so brilliant as a work in itself, yet so good on a deeper emotional level. i cant wait to understand it more precisely.

Anonymous said...

still dont like the last line..

but thats only one opinion. o. o. o.
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what do you dream of?
-Im wondering what the glass ceiling refers to..

May-Belle said...

currently i'm dreaming of storms
gathering everything together. looking at him and holding tight. letting him hold me safe until the storm comes and its all underwater and blue and the books blur past with their ink smudging down the page and i can't get out to the air or to him